the big writing conference

Well, after having my writing conference earlier today, I'm feeling somewhat better about my research and how the paper is coming along. I have a better understanding on what is being expected, and my thesis is becoming more clear as I think it over. Im probably going to change the second paragraph a bit, showing more evidence and concrete detail. My thesis is going to be how rock bands have false impressions, them seeming to be these horrible and disruptive people when we dont even know the true story. The ending is going to be changed up as well, giving a bit of a plot twist for a little fun. Ok that most likely wasnt funny at all, but oh well. Have to give credit for trying, for trying is all that matters.